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The Lady of a Wicked Soul by ~jallil-drathir:iconjallil-drathir:





Gazing into Crimson eyes,
Into her softened chill,
Her voice like a melodic whisper,
She's ready for the kill.

Beauty is the mask,
Of her wicked soul,
Her words sweet as poison,
Her embrace crushing and cold.

Fair is the lady,
Though evil just the same,
Whence the heart was gone,
All the darkness came.

With skin as pale as snow,
And the darkest wings,
One should want to kill her,
Until she stops and sings.

Oh what sorrow fills me,
To listen to her song,
A tragic tale it is indeed,
Of a million things that went wrong.

But who could kill the lady?
They say that there is only one-
Opposite her power over ice,
He holds the fire of the sun.

Of demon's blood this boy would be,
Bit by the very Queen,
Whom should be destroyed by him,
He's clueless to whom he had been.

Only the Lady knows this boy,
From his past life,
For he had done much,
To make the Lady his wife.

Now he has found another,
And fire fills his eyes,
His anger directed to the Lady,
And this is where she dies.

But life still chains her to its grasp,
Poor Isil, she can not die.
Can't be with her beloved Darius,
And, once again loses the heart to cry.
©2007-2009 ~jallil-drathir
:iconjallil-drathir:

Author's Comments

Kind of the story of Isil's life.

Good luck finding out who I'm talking about through this whole thing. XD

Dedicated to my Knight, as well as Isil.

Don't forget to comment. ^^

If you're interested in learning more about Isil+every other character possibly mentioned in this poem, here is a good place to start: [link]

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:iconhinata211:
It's very beautiful
and it's also beautifully written as well
:iconjallil-drathir:
Thanks. ^^

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And so shall fall that which has risen from death, still yet in Death's embrace. As always, I bow to thee, my Queen...but she was right all along, and you can not deny this.
:iconjallil-drathir:
Thank you. ^^

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And so shall fall that which has risen from death, still yet in Death's embrace. As always, I bow to thee, my Queen...but she was right all along, and you can not deny this.
:iconjohnnyuwibami:
Very nicely done.

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I've spent 99% of my money on wine, women and song. The rest I wasted.
:iconjallil-drathir:
Thanks. ^^

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And so shall fall that which has risen from death, still yet in Death's embrace. As always, I bow to thee, my Queen...but she was right all along, and you can not deny this.
:iconchi-veldrin:
Isil! It's so beautiful... *bites lip*

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Stop, drop and roll - my cat has the matches.
:iconjallil-drathir:
Thanks. ^^ And you got that right! Isil is to be feared and loved! *Insert maniacle laughter here*

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And so shall fall that which has risen from death, still yet in Death's embrace. As always, I bow to thee, my Queen...but she was right all along, and you can not deny this.

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